


Wow! Absolutely awesome Shiori!






Thanks! I'm not the greatest when it comes to adding big muscles to female characters, but I thought this turned out pretty well, better than the last time I drew the character. 


Well done.

Nice work on the lighting- it's a challenging angle, especially given the pose and movement. The hard lighting suits her harder figure well, I think.

I realized it's been a while since I've really played around with strong lighting in my colored images, the way I used to years back. This one and the Bloody Valentine image were a way for me to return to form. Glad you like it!

The stomach muscles are a bit hard tho

Well yeah, she's a hardbody type. 


This is pretty damn good. Her legs and hips look great. Not to many people understand this.

Thanks a lot! I'm not worried about it--everyone's entitled to their opinion. 


This is true. 


This is a really sick 'level-up' piece for you man. The pose is great and the colours are stunning. It's been really nice seeing you work harder and harder on your artwork of late, and seeing how that work's really paying off, the dynamic lighting on this really makes it pop, and again, the extra work on the pose and foreshortening is aces 


Thanks! It was that Daily Draw thing I did last month...it really motivated me. I strongly felt the need to draw something and post it every single day...a trend I have no intention of stopping now. We naturally improve the more we do something so I'm glad I'm not the only one noticing a little improvement in my work these days. 


Oh I dig all right. Man, look at her! You nailed her beefy legs for sure. Cute expression on her face too. Thanks for this!

Thanks, I'm glad you approve.
I really wanted to capture the essence of your character and get what you wanted across as accurately as I could.


I don't think you should request critiques on commissions.



Really? Why not?

Something tells me that person would have said what they wanted to say no matter what.

Nice job, btw! 


Ah, thanks! 


Oh you meant that. I see.

Plus, it really doesn't seem to matter one way or the other. Few folks pay attention to whether there's a crit request or not--they just say what they want to say, at least that's been my experience. It doesn't bother me.

I just think it does the commissioner a disservice allowing negative feedback publicly laid out about work they paid for.
actually disables all comments on his commission work. That's what went through my head.


I can understand that, but since I'm no fan of disabling comments, can't really control what people say. I do see your point though.

those are one d@mn big legs

You should see the original. [link] I actually toned them down if you can believe it.
I don't do muscle girls quite as well as I could with practice.


still thighs are too large >.>

Oh yeah, YOU understand anatomy. 


Me? ya talkin to me? ofc i understand anatomy, thnks for complement .
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