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JD: Dance 1 Page 2 by Dualmask JD: Dance 1 Page 2 by Dualmask
I finished this weeks ago, figured I might as well put it up.
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Chizel-Man Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looking good man. Definitely looks official.
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cyberyanmar Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Whazizname Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013   General Artist
:)
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wbd Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks good to me! The action is easy to follow, and the middle wide panel does a great job of showing the characters present, while not overpowering the overall composition.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I have to admit that even with everything else I like to try, making comics is one of the more comfortable mediums for me artistically. Now if only I could stay motivated for the long haul.
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Lord-Retsudo Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Very smooth, very slick. I'm well impressed :D
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you dig it! I'm pretty happy with how the colors turned out.
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Lord-Retsudo Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Definitely. Looking forward to seeing more of these in future.
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psychoheat Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
the scenes have nice movement and flow, good story telling. by putting the chopper so close to the shadow makes it seem like the chopper is absurdly big and close to the ground. move the characters to the right and also the chopper
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Is it a little better now at least?
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:iconpsychoheat:
psychoheat Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
I think it does pop more
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I can't say I see what you're seeing there, to be honest. It feels pretty clear to me the chopper is flying off, but I could be too close to the art to make a proper judgment. At any rate, I can't move the chopper at this point because then it would crowd the compound in the background of the last panel, and changing that would involve too much redrawing to make it worthwhile. Moving the characters to the right would be simple enough, but then they would be off-center in relation to the compound.

What I could do easily enough is change the shadow of that sand dune behind the helicopter.
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GaryPope Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Nice! It's like a movie scene. A very good, sexy lady with weapons movie scene!!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Gary! Guess I've still got a little of what I learned in cinematography and storyboarding classes back in the day.
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SilverBolt14 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Artist
Much Better!!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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47ness Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, did I mention I love that you included a real brick wall of a woman on the team? Sometimes it just pays to have the best for a mission...!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Variety is the spice of life, I always say. :D
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RODCOM1000 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
Looking good, Jonathan! Keep em coming!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I think I will. :nod: Thanks!
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Joybuzzer Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
I look at panel 3 and think "One of them needs cat ears!"
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconfacepalmplz:

:lol: Just kidding. :D
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Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Okay this is awesome! :w00t:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you dig it!
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