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-Elisa Masters- by Dualmask -Elisa Masters- by Dualmask
Commission for :iconsilverbolt14:

Sketched on Bienfang sketch paper with mechanical pencils, inked with Copic Multiliner and brush pen, cel shaded in Photoshop CS4.
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:iconmdetector5ive:
It's been a while since I wrote a critique for something, so let's see how this one goes.

The anatomy is great. I'm not familiar with this character, and you did say it was a commission for someone, so if she's supposed to look like this, that's great.

The lineart and the coloring look good, but seeing how you did the "close up" technique in the background, we can see that the lineart doesn't look smooth. It's a minor nitpick, but it doesn't take away from the overall picture, especially when it's just a background element. (an aside, though: I really need to learn how to do the "close up" technique for my digital stuff. Using photos for backgrounds is all well and good, I'm limited to photos I took myself.)

Everything looks solid for the most part.
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:iconwhiteblousefever:
WhiteBlouseFEVER Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
LOVE ebony "copettes"!
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:iconsuperjustinbros:
Superjustinbros Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She has some really mic epants.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I think you meant 'nice pants'? Thanks!
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:iconsuperjustinbros:
Superjustinbros Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I meant to say nice pants.

Also you're welcome.
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:iconwbd:
wbd Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work- good posing, and the shading is effective. The background is a simple reverse of the foreground, but it is effective.

One thing that really stands out for me is the fabric folds on her shirt. They are very convincing, and well rendered.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! This was great practice for me; I don't draw regular attire often enough.
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:iconletmeseebeuty:
LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
IS she ok?? beautiful work sir
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:iconartistik-bootya:
Artistik-Bootya Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOT Work :thumbsup:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it!
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:iconartistik-bootya:
Artistik-Bootya Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep :-) :peace:
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:iconchizel-man:
Chizel-Man Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, Needless to say, I'm very impressed with this woman:D As well as the art as a whole:nod:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! It's always the images you least expect to be a hit...
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:iconchizel-man:
Chizel-Man Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome man.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Nice picture Dualmask!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Randommode! :D
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:icon12mark21:
12mark21 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Gorgeous work!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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:iconcyberyanmar:
cyberyanmar Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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:iconcyberyanmar:
cyberyanmar Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'd love to die drowning under those :P
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:icongarypope:
GaryPope Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Nice job on this. Colors look great! You once told me to be aware of the size of the lower leg. I think making them slimmer here would have helped this be even better, but you knocked out a nice pose.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it! The whole figure I drew is actually toned down compared to the reference I received. It's a build that you'd love, I'm sure. ;) Unfortunately, I can't show it.

I'm actually surprised at the reception this piece has received. It's on the verge of being my most popular piece of 2013 so far, and I honestly didn't do anything out of the ordinary (from my POV anyway).
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:iconwhazizname:
Whazizname Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013   General Artist
:)
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:iconfarraj:
Farraj Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I love the pose and the cloth pose ^^

How many houres?
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This was actually rather quick. Maybe three hours from start to finish. Glad you like it!
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:iconunloadcomics:
UnloadComics Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Got a similar looking character called Squeeze in Flirtatious Four, she's transfromed from a standard wife into a super-strong muscle woman by a leak at the chemical plant where her husband work. This is well worth a favourite and reminds me of the images used in 70's Marvel and Luke Cage, Power-Man great stuff...
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it!
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:iconsilverbolt14:
SilverBolt14 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Artist
I am a happy customer!!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I aim to please!
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:iconskaramine:
Skaramine Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, she can frisk me any day!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
She looks like she might be the kind to use excessive force! :D
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:iconskaramine:
Skaramine Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good, cuz my shoulder needs to be popped from its socket. X.X
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ain't nothin' like a woman in uniform! :love:
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:iconcaspertine:
caspertine Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
amen
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:nod:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Indeed! Thanks Marcus!
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NP! :D
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:iconshadowleviathanzero:
ShadowLeviathanZero Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Awesome work!! She's sexy and strong!! That's what I'm getting when I see her. Once again, pure awesome!!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! Nothing like a strong and sexy woman!
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:iconballoonprincess:
BalloonPrincess Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
A good and strong pose. :)
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it!
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:iconebony-chan:
ebony-chan Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Nice work here man. I love the pose and the strength in her pose. She's beautiful.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! When I saw the character design, the idea for the pose came naturally.
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:iconadekii:
adekii Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh nice! She looks so powerful, and I love the shading here :D
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! Just my basic cel shading, I guess that's still the best way for me to color. :)
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:iconadekii:
adekii Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so dang good at it :D
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:iconmdetector5ive:
MDetector5ive Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like how she looks.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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