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Callsign: Phantom by Dualmask Callsign: Phantom by Dualmask
Another quickie I did to loosen up. Again, took about an hour. It's kind of liberating, not worrying so much about clean, near-perfect lines and just...having a little fun. I didn't even go through the trouble to make sure I used the exact same colors from other incarnations of the character. The purple for her body suit is probably off, among other things.

Alexia Ford/Phantom is part of my WEAPON Combat League concept.
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I know that the lines here are not as clean as you are used to, but I do think they look good. I'd even go as far as to consider them a "style". The colors work well and the female figure is very accurate. The only constructive criticism I could offer is to maybe add a little more contrast in her skin tones. From looking at the other great works in your gallery I can tell this is something you have accomplished time and time again and can continue to accomplish in the future.

Keep in mind that I am not an expert. I'm just someone who's familiar with much of the great work that you create.
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Chizel-Man Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

I completely understand where your coming from. Going the sketchy route is very liberating. Haha, your sketches are still 10x better than my clean work.

 

Another awesome style Jonathan man.

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Dualmask Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Oh please, you need to stop selling yourself short...your work is beastly and you know it. :D
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Chizel-Man Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It means a lot that you feel that way man.
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killacam1982 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love her armour and costume. And she is curvy. Great characer.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! Glad you like her. I really should draw her more often.
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killacam1982 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah you should.
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wbd Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The lines aren't clean, but I think they have a nice sense of energy to them. As for colors, maybe it's best to adjust them to the composition, rather than sticking to the original form- they seem to work well together here.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I think this turned out pretty well. It makes me think that sometimes super-clean line art is overrated. Thanks for commenting!
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wbd Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lively energy is something I strive for- maybe I don't always get there, but it's so vital to a drawing. If the tradeoff is a bit of rough linework, it's worth it.
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GaryPope Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Really nice work, JP! Love how you drew the face(really cute!) and hairstyle. I like the concept as well. It's kinda different for you, in a good way and the colors work well. as for a critique, just this sta.sh/0c6c0ivh6xl and that kinda thing is a recurring thing with you that I don't believe is a a style thing I think you can fix.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I didn't want her breastplate to be separated like that--I was going more for a flatter, unified shape--trying to avoid the boob-plate look. The hand does need a little work, I agree. Thanks!
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GaryPope Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Heh, you missed the point. Breast placement, not style.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I dunno...the placement looks fine to me. I keep looking it over without the color and it doesn't feel right to make changes. Maybe I just need to go back and practice my fundamentals.
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GaryPope Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
See, now I feel like a jackass for pointing that out since you don't see it. Well, I already said I liked it and what I like about it. I'll just leave it at that.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You shouldn't feel like a jackass...I'm the one with the problem! ^^; You see something that I don't...or can't. I'm not upset with you at all.
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Joybuzzer Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Looks good regardless!
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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AMTRAK Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Good job with this.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it!
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AMTRAK Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Indeed.
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Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol Well it's still nice dude, don't beat yourself up you got a picture done and colored :) 
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I wasn't beating myself up, I was just remarking on how little time I spent on this. It feels good to just loosen up and not worry so much from time to time.
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adekii Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You express so much with quick lines!  By contrast, if I don't use vector lines nobody can tell what it was I was trying to do XD  I also love how cute she is!  Nice work :)
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! It's all about loosening up and not worrying so much--a lesson that I'm trying to teach myself again. You're not the first person to compliment her cuteness ... I must be doing something right. :D
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