hey it's finished, I hope you like the color scheme I picked for her suit. It kinda reminds me of megaman and you should try looking at it for like a minute without blinking. She looks like a real 3D image when you do. (like those pictures you stare at it up close and walk away from slowly to see another image) [link]
It kind of looks like you made it appear as though a great deal of her lower body is exposed, which I guess is my fault because of how I drew it, but she is designed to be wearing a full body suit with only her head exposed.
Other than that, you're getting a bit better...maybe you should slow down on trying to mimic the 3D look and practice your basic coloring and shading skills. Lay down flat colors, pick a light source and apply highlights and shadows appropriately.
Hehe yeah X_X my bad I thought those were stomach lines lol and I wasn't trying to make it look three d really. XD I just played around with layers a bit trying to make the background look like one of those holographic trading cards XD Though really, if you don't blink at it for a few seconds in a row it does kinda pop out at you @_@