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Jessie - collaboration by =Dualmask:iconDualmask:

Categories Fan Art > Digital Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2009 =Dualmask
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Artist's Comments

I mentioned in the past that :iconmidnighter: and I were planning to work together, hopefully getting lots of tag team commissions. To see how well we'd work together, we mutually agreed to create an image, in this case :iconthe-kid36:'s character Jessie, for his Jessie jam.

Even though it's a simple production, I think it looks pretty good.

Original drawing and flying leaves by :iconmidnighter:
Inks, colors and rest of bg by :icondualmask:

Give a shout-out to Midnighter's upload of the image too!

What do you think?

Critiques


:iconkhantinka:
=Khantinka Apr 26, 2009, 5:15:17 PM
Back lighting is tough and you've done a decent job on this one! I think the eyes are really good, they convey emotion to me which i think can be tough for a line art. One thing i noticed straight away is that the girls breasts seem lopsided. The left one looks bigger by a noticeable amount and I'm not sure if it is just the angle at which it is drawn or just a lack of defining lines to express the right breast. Overall i think you did a great job, lighting is one of my biggest problem areas and this one looked tricky. I think you could have improoved this with a bit more contrast where the light falls, for example on the boot, left shoulder and top of the head.
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*rudys-replacement Apr 20, 2009, 3:32:29 PM
sweet - looks good man! =)

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=Dualmask Apr 20, 2009, 3:34:14 PM
Thanks! Glad you like it! :D

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*JonKin Apr 20, 2009, 3:49:35 PM
It looks great, bro. You two should be proud of yourselves. Also, thanks for the info about the art jam!

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=hotrod5 Apr 20, 2009, 6:08:36 PM
Very nice collab with this character.
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~EchoWing Apr 20, 2009, 6:30:15 PM
Simplicity is always a good thing, and this is a clear example of why. The two of you have some nice work.

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Mood: Wow! ~the-kid36 Apr 20, 2009, 7:22:04 PM
holy shit!!!!!! :O i really love this dude, this is a great collab, thank you for taking part in the jam buddy :D

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~Mr-KaMiKaZe Apr 21, 2009, 6:29:16 AM
it Looks really good and She is So Cool :D
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~DW-DeathWisH Apr 21, 2009, 6:31:37 AM
Excellent collab now i gotta bug u to finish up my jessie drawing like this!!

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