Ya know Dual, what impresses me about this the most is the coloring. I feel that this is your greatest strength as an artist. Something that I think needs work one however is the action; it just doesn't look as impactful as it should IMO. It looks like the woman is lightly tapping the dude on the neck with her elbow and the guy's has a expression of shock instead of pain on his face.
Yeah, you're right. I was going for a look of shock from the blow, but I agree it didn't come off as forceful as it should have. But the client liked it from inception, so in the interest of getting it done I just went through the motions. I felt like redrawing it at one point, but the backlog is too heavy; I have to keep moving forward. Thanks for the feedback!