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$5 Flame Enchantress by =Dualmask:iconDualmask:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Traditional Media > Cartoons > Drawings

©2009 =Dualmask
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$5 sketch commission for :iconaldrazar: of this character.

.05 mechanical pencil on copier paper, about 45 minutes.

No ref used.

Note me if you want one!

Edit: made some repairs based on :iconkhantinka:'s critique.

Critiques


:iconkhantinka:
=Khantinka Apr 28, 2009, 8:38:33 PM
This is a really great drawing so take what critisism i give with the knowledge that i am nitpicking. The clothing is fantastic, not sure if you got the idea from the guy whose comission it was but either way it is sweet. I think the buckle needs to be more side on if this is meant to be fully profile, and I also think you need to look at some referances for profile faces. The head overall looks a little too small and i can see a few buggy places at the chin and top lip. Remember that in a traditionally drawn face the eyes are usually (unless you are trying to stylise it) half way down the head.
Aside from my nitpicking, i really love the pose (i always love your poses) and the body anatomy is really fluid. I love the implied texture of the fur as well. Hope i've been helpful... if i had a character i would totally get you to draw it. If i thought i could get away with it i'd pay you to draw my assignment characters :D
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=Shuma-Gorath Apr 28, 2009, 4:24:06 PM
Another nice one

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*Feels Wrist* No Pulse... *Feels Heart* No Heartbeat... *Looks at others* If Condition does not improve this man.. is dead.
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=Dualmask Apr 28, 2009, 4:43:24 PM
Glad you like it!

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Be decisive, even if it means you might be wrong.--H. Jackson Brown Jr. [link]
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~ebony-chan Apr 28, 2009, 5:51:16 PM
Really cool. I really like your work it's improving so much. =)
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=Shuma-Gorath Apr 28, 2009, 6:06:14 PM
=)

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*Feels Wrist* No Pulse... *Feels Heart* No Heartbeat... *Looks at others* If Condition does not improve this man.. is dead.
:icondualmask:
=Dualmask Apr 28, 2009, 6:10:50 PM
Thanks! Just drawing for the love of the craft. :)

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Be decisive, even if it means you might be wrong.--H. Jackson Brown Jr. [link]
:iconebony-chan:
~ebony-chan Apr 28, 2009, 6:15:43 PM
Yeah I think sometimes we artists get so wrapped up in pleasing others and improving.That we forget to have fun with our work it's suppose to be something to help us relaxe and have fun. =)
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*wbd Apr 28, 2009, 6:47:15 PM
Again, great work! There's a certain subtlety to the lines that you're using in this one that I really like. Her figure and form are lithe and really complement her look. The details like the fur trim and the embroidery are neat and add a lot to this.
:icondualmask:
=Dualmask Apr 28, 2009, 7:23:49 PM
Thanks man! I felt like I was under a bit of pressure to represent the details as best I could (the client was specific about me drawing the second outfit on the reference) but I knew I wouldn't be able to draw it nearly as intricately as the original. I guess I did a fine job of abstracting it. :)

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Be decisive, even if it means you might be wrong.--H. Jackson Brown Jr. [link]
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*Randommode Apr 30, 2009, 3:54:13 PM
She has her butt in the air just a bit- nice work ;)
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